Apr
29

Pipped at the post!

Posted by Denise on April 29, 2008 under Books, Excerpts

Note my trembling upper lip, the brave way I choke back the tears. Mr Gorgeous was pipped at the post in the Book Cover of the Year contest - by a pod of sexy orca whales! They make a truly beautiful cover. Oh woe, oh woe is me… Mr Gorgeous came second.

To see all the place-getters, pop over to Erin Aislinn’s website. Then come right back so you can hold my hand.

You’ll remember Mr Gorgeous was February Book Cover of the Month? There’s the award, on the left. All hail to Syneca, Goddess of Ellora’s Cave covers, who created it. She’s an amazing artist.

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU for voting. You’re all wonderful!

I decided a little excerpt would make me feel better. It’s emotionally exhausting being gracious, you know. ;-)

A gentle fist took Anje’s loins and squeezed. Holy Mother, she’d never had a man Brin’s size! Two heartbeats later, the full sense of what he’d said caught up with her and for an instant, all the strength leaked out of her knees. She stumbled and Brin steadied her.

We?” Her voice cracked. “What do you mean, we?”

“Exactly what I said. Ah Trey. Good.” Trey laid a rough bar of soap and a clean shirt on the rock. Brin moved behind her and untied her hands. Over his shoulder, he said to the other man, “You start at her feet. I’ll meet you in the middle. And scrub!” He sounded amused. “How long since you had a bath, scout?”

“Look, you wouldn’t—” Anje lunged away in mid-sentence. Two steps later, she was sprinting. The forest was the Mother’s. It would hide her.

But before she could really hit her stride, a long arm snagged her elbow and spun her around to smack into Brin’s powerful chest. Clucking his disapproval, Trey knelt and grasped her ankles, fumbling with the laces on her boots. He was bare already, the sunlight sparkling cheerfully on the knobs of his spine, on firm, creamy flesh.

Ah, Mother help her! Anje kicked hard with her heel, putting all the strength of thigh and hip into straightening her leg and catching him viciously on the collarbone. He disappeared with a muffled curse and a splash.

Abruptly, her legs were swept out from under her. She landed in the shallows with a tremendous, smacking splash and a mountain fell on top of her.

She swore, bucking like a fellwolf in a trap, squirming against the weight of Brin’s body. He had her caged, pressing her into the soft sand, his chest spreading her breasts beneath him. His huge hands were wrapped around her throat, the fingers set firmly against her thundering pulse. The threat was clear, but the pressure was not at all uncomfortable.

“Listen to me, scout.” He trapped her legs under his, the wet leather of his trews slick and slippery on her thigh. He wasn’t even breathing hard. “I may have been a little blunt.”

Blunt?” She glared, wondering why the heat of her rage and terror hadn’t boiled the blood in his veins.

Inky lashes swept over his eyes. When he looked up, she lost her train of thought for a second. “We won’t hurt you, I swear. We can’t. Lufra’s Law does not permit it.”

The water lapped cool over her limbs, kissed the back of her neck.

Trey’s voice came from beside her, cajoling. “Think how good it’ll be to be clean. Come on, sweeting.”

“Lufra’s Law?” she croaked, her gaze still tangled with Brin’s.

Slowly, he peeled his body away, his dark face impassive. But she thought he was well pleased with himself. “Show some sense, scout. You’re more than outnumbered and I’ve given my word we won’t hurt you.”

“Gods! How stupid do you think I am?” Her face twisted with scorn, while her heart galloped like a runaway vran. She’d never felt so small, so helpless.

So very, very female.

“For the last time, we won’t rape you!” Brin’s lips thinned. “What is it about Feolin honor you don’t understand?”

“Feolin honor…?” Words failed her. Carefully, she sat up.

“Lufra’s Law does not permit a woman to be taken against her will.” Brin showed his teeth. “Lufra is a goddess of pleasure, of love. The use of force in the act of sex is sacrilege to the Feolin.”

“But you said you were going to…” She had to drag in a breath. “…fuck me.”

The tension went out of his shoulders. He enveloped her wrist in one hand and carried it to his lips. “And we will.” His tongue drew tiny circles over the flutter of her pulse. “With great pleasure. Yours too.”

“But you said—”

“Without before within,” said Trey. He rubbed his shoulder against hers, like a temple cat.

“For the Mother’s sake, speak plainly! What do you mean?”

“Plainly? Very well,” said Brin. His voice was deep and dispassionate. “The Law of Lufra states that no man may take his pleasure inside any part of a woman’s body, unless she has offered to the Goddess first. Each time, every time. Without before within. You see?”

“Offered to the goddess?” Anje stared. “Oh.” Comprehension dawned. “You mean if I don’t come, you can’t fuck me?”

“Crudely put, but true. Lufra cares only for pleasure, freely given.” This time, he did smile—a crooked smile, true, but devastating for all that. She wondered if he knew what a lethal weapon he had. Hah! Of course he knew, the calculating bastard.

Anje looked from one grinning face to the other. The tide of her panic receded slightly, allowing her to breathe. Inside her, a sliver of dark arousal tangled with the fear and fury. Ruthlessly, she stamped it out.

The arrogance of them, the smug, unmitigated… To hold a Child of the Mother and expect her to— Men serviced her, not the other way around.

“Go to hell!” So furious she was panting, she snatched up the clean shirt.

Brin actually chuckled, a dark and wicked sound that made her belly clench. “Mind you, the Law of Lufra is not fussy as to ways and means.”

He lunged.

The scuffle was short and sharp, and she had the satisfaction of hearing him grunt when she elbowed his inner thigh, perilously high. But the end was inevitable.

“Come on, scout.” She ignored the seductive whisper. “You’re safe as long as you control your…urges. I give you my word.”

Trey scrambled closer and took her hands. “You might as well get clean, darling. We aren’t letting you go.”

Brin stood and tugged at the laces of his trews. Anje looked away, but not before she caught a glimpse of a nasty bruise, riding low on one hard hip. He chuckled.

Trey removed her boots and pulled her down until she was reclining on the sandy shelf. As he arranged her feet on his thigh, she heard splashing and Brin settled behind her. A big, muscled arm slid beneath her neck. “Lean your head back, scout.”

For an instant longer, she held firm. Ah Mother, Trey was right, it would be wonderful to bathe properly. Among the Children, a warrior’s word was her bond. Why it should be she couldn’t fathom, but instinct told her she could trust the Feolin to be no different.

She knew she couldn’t expect them not to push Lufra’s Law to its limit—and hers. Gods there wasn’t anything she’d put past them! Nonetheless, this body was hers to control. She could be strong.

And after she was clean and fed—it had been hours since she’d eaten—she’d be on her way with the precious map. They had to sleep sometime. Through half-closed eyes, she caressed Trey’s shoulders with her gaze. She might even arrange a meeting later, on her own terms, between clean sheets.

But which man? How…piquant.

Feeling confident for the first time since Brin’s hard hands had grabbed her on the hilltop, she relaxed and let herself be held.

The water felt wonderful on her scalp, Brin’s fingers unraveling her braids and swishing her hair back and forth, sifting and stroking. The soap smelt spicy, astringent, a masculine smell. She liked it.

“Good?”

Anje groaned. Trey rubbed the soles of her feet and worked lather between her toes.

She allowed herself to drift. Ah, Mother of the world, she was tired. Three months was a long, lonely time. The relaxation pulled her under, turning her limbs to honey. A warm mouth whispered over her cheek, traced her eyebrow.

So very tempting. No pressure. As long as she didn’t climax, she could relax and enjoy being pampered. The Children had no time for pampering. What utterly wicked luxury.

“What’s your name?” Brin murmured in her ear.

“Anje,” she said and groaned again, this time with disgust at her own stupidity.

Read the first chapter of Gift of the Goddess , or buy the book (print or electronic).


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  1. danette Said,

    That cover is just too yummy. Will it be out in print soon? Drool on the computer is bad ;)

    Thanks for the excerpt.

    Hugs, Danette

  2. Danielle Said,

    Whales you say?
    As far as I’m concerned Mr Gorgeous is Number 1.
    D

  3. Rachel C Said,

    Whales??
    What the…?
    Mmmmm….. well it is artistic, but really? Whales?
    Go figure.
    I’d rather Mr Gorgeous any day.

  4. Eleni Said,

    Oh Mr Gorgeous, how could this be :???: I thought your cover was the best Denise — not to say I didn’t like the others, but artistically, it was the best composed and the most alluring. So hugs but congrats that Mr Gorgeous came second (how, I still don’t understand :?: )

  5. Elaine Said,

    I absolutely love the relative sizes of the pictures of first and second places in this competition here on your blog, Denise. Well put. I’ve always loved Mr Gorgeous but Jan in Tailspin won my heart.

  6. Denise Said,

    Ah, Danette, she said, rubbing her hands together with evil glee. GIFT OF THE GODDESS is out in print right now! Drool no longer. :mrgreen:

    You can buy it from -
    Ellora’s Cave - http://www.jasminejade.com/pm-3708-236-phoenix-rising-gift-of-the-goddess.aspx
    Amazon - http://tinyurl.com/yv9v5k
    And, of course, your local friendly bookstore like Barnes and Noble.

    And believe me, Mr Gorgeous looks simply beeyootiful (or as Susan would say, beautifuck) in trade paperback.

  7. Denise Said,

    EXACTLY, Danielle. He’ll always be first in my heart - not only because he’s gorgeous, but because he was my very first book as published author. The most wonderful, meaningful thing in the world…

  8. Denise Said,

    Yes, Rachel, I’ve spent quite a lot of time going and figuring. Still don’t get it, though have to say the whales are very good-lookin’.

    For whales. ;-)

  9. Denise Said,

    Thanks Eleni, it’s lovely of you to pop over with some sympathy when I know how busy you are. And thanks for the congrats.

    Go have another Tim Tam, you sweetie. :smile:

  10. Denise Said,

    Erm, Elaine, I think that must have been pretty thunderous Freudian slip. I just sized the images automatically. Oh dear, oh dear. :roll: So much for being a gracious lady.

    Ah, Jan… You’re not alone there, Elaine. There’s something about a tortured hero… Gets me every damn time. Or maybe it’s the wings. Syneca was brilliant with them. I’m actually thinking of entering the TAILSPIN cover for Erin’s current cover contest.

  11. Eleni Said,

    I always have time for you Denise darling :grin: and Mr Gorgeous deserved to be talked about. The injustice of it! As for the Tim Tams - they are no longer in this house…. though just having orthodox easter, I have plenty of chocolate :wink: In fact I ate a small bunny of dark chocolate. :shock: That is better for you isn’t it :wink: :wink:

  12. Susan Said,

    Oh dear Denise, I saw the results go up and thought to commiserate at the time but decided to avoid commenting. Whales might be mammals, but they aren’t the ones I’d want a relationship with :roll: Console yourself, and here are some virtual hugs, I’ll even throw in some virtual chocolate :cool: Generous of me isn’t it. Yup I am very fond of Mirry (and of Jan, too, although he didn’t make the cover), but Mr. Gorgeous has a special place in my heart because he is the one who tempted me to come (and cum - or is that taking the level a bit too low?) into your world. On the very first day the book came onto the Ellora’s Cave site, too. I’m sure there are many more tempted and many more will continue to be.

    I think tonight I will take out my postcards and gorge myself on the cover that deserved to have won! :idea:

  13. Denise Said,

    Of course a chocolate bunny’s good for you, Eleni. It’s a well-known fact! :lol:

  14. Denise Said,

    Thanks, Susan. All hugs and choccie gratefully accepted. Seriously, that was an awesome cover for a newbie author. I’m so very very grateful. As I’ve said before, I’m sure it did more to sell the book than I did.

  15. Meg Said,

    Hmmmm….well the whales are pretty and the cover is nice, but I would probably pass it up in the book store for Mr.G. He’s much more eye catching…. ;)

  16. Jen Said,

    Orcas are not sexy. Orcas are big. And… well not as sexy as Mr. Gorgeous. *shakes head* Really, do they have any sense?

  17. Kim S. Said,

    I love whales and all, but come on…. :roll:

    Fishy blubber over man meat?????? :shock:

    Holy machras, did everyone but me vote with their eyes closed??? :lol:

  18. Dani Said,

    Oh, oh, oh, I’m going to faint! I have to watch myself when you post Mr. Gorgeous! I can’t stop drooling and panting when I look at him. He should have won the contest. I mean the wales are cute and all, but this is Mr. Gorgeous we’re talking about here! :twisted:

  19. Jenny Said,

    Mr. Gorgeous is W-A-Y better than whales. In fact when I saw the results I had to wonder what was wrong with people. I think most Ellora’s covers are way better than most in that contest. I got to admit that I once bought one of Ellora’s books for the cover. Am I bad or what? I really tried to read the book, but vampires are way over used …

  20. Jenny Said,

    And when I bought your book Denise, I did not buy for the cover, yummy as it is… I had read Tailspin and wanted to read everything you wrote. :smile:

  21. Denise Said,

    Oh Meg, I think any red-blooded woman would reach right out for Mr Gorgeous! I mean… how could you not?

  22. Denise Said,

    I agree, Jen. Amazing…

  23. Denise Said,

    Dani - Mr G goes with me everywhere - on my PDA, in my handbag (as a postcard), as my screensaver. And mind you, I’ve had some fantabulous covers since then - but there’s something very special about Mr G for me, and it’s not just his beautiful bod. Being my first, you know… :wink:

  24. Denise Said,

    Thanks Jenny, that was lovely of you - you “glommed” me! When you read a book and then go back to the author’s previous works it’s called glomming them. It’s a great concept IMO, but a truly weird word. :roll: And yes, most EC covers are pretty good.

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