Apr
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Happy dancin’ with a Passionate Plume

Posted by Denise on April 16, 2008 under Books, Excerpts

:mrgreen: Doin’ the Happy Dance at Rossetti Towers.

TAILSPIN is a finalist in the 2007 Passionate Plume Contest!!! Yay!!! :mrgreen:

It’s run by Passionate Ink, a Special Interest Chapter of Romance Writers of America for erotic romance writers.

Let me tell you, I am absolutely deelighted! To be in a final with all those fine writers is such a blast. And what’s even better - the winners in each category are announced at the PI luncheon at the RWA Conference in San Francisco and I’ll be there. Oh boy, oh boy, oh boy!!!

And I get this neat little logo to put on this blog and my website, so I can brag properly. heh heh

I’ll return to our normal program tomorrow with a Wordplay post, but I just had to tell you. The email came at the best time. I’ve just finished the edits for THE FLAME AND THE SHADOW and I was deep, deep in Editing Hell. Didn’t know up from down, Arthur from Martha - whether I was making the damn thing better or worse. Actually, I still don’t know, but it’s gone now - out of my hands. Whoosh! to my editor.

To celebrate, I thought we’d have an excerpt - Ah, Mirry…


Mirry slid his palm from her shoulder to her hand, lingering over the caress. He grasped it and drew it up slowly, over his knee. Higher.“You may as well look, you know. It won’t go away while you’re touching me.” His voice was so absolutely toneless, she knew he must be amused by her naivety. But when she glanced into his face, there was nothing to be seen but calm and concentration.Nonetheless, the suspicion he was laughing at her lingered and the sting of it gave her courage.She let herself look.And made a startling discovery. “Lufra! There’s no hair on your body.”“Only feathers,” he agreed. “Except on my head.”

Something tugged her closer and she realized his tail was snugged around her waist, the feathered end of it brushing her belly. But that was a peripheral consideration. She leaned forward, enthralled, and his hips rose slightly off the bed.

She’d never cared much for testicles, though Veryl had been inordinately proud of his. They’d been big enough for manliness, she supposed—she had no grounds for comparison. But they’d been wrinkled and hairy and pendulous, not round and rosy-gold and tight like ripe gaeta fruits on the vine. Bare and smooth.

All the air in the wagon evaporated. She couldn’t suck enough of it into her lungs.

When she licked her lips, Mirry made a purring noise deep in his throat. His…his… Lufra, she had to brace herself to form the word, even in her head. His cock reared over his ridged stomach, a golden column. The broad head flushed a deep amber and a pearl of moisture glimmered on the tip, gilded by the light of the lantern. As she watched, he took it in one hand, running his thumb over the satiny skin with casual competence. His chest rose and fell, the gilded nipples fiercely erect.

Shameless, he was absolutely shameless.

“True enough.” He chuckled and her sex contracted with greed at the wicked, masculine sound. Gods, she’d spoken aloud! Either that or he’d read her mind.

“Fledge.” Plumage rustled as he tilted his head, holding her pinned with the intensity of his raptor’s gaze. Suddenly, she had an insight into the mortal terrors of small tasty creatures like bunrats. “Touch me.”

There was no room for choice in his tone, nothing but imperious demand. Fledge froze, immobilized by longing, paralyzed by fear.

The seconds stretched. Finally, Mirry sighed. The strange, tufted brows drew together. He lifted his fingers away from hers, uncoiled his tail from around her waist. Without the warmth of his flesh, a chill slithered down her spine.

He tucked his hands behind his head, revealing more russet-colored, wispy down, this time in the hollows under his arms. The sight affected her strangely, made her chest hurt.

“Please,” he said. The word seemed dragged out of him. Even as his hips lifted and his cock quivered, his sculptured lips compressed in a thin line of displeasure. Fledge knew that expression. She’d angered him. Gods. Her spine stiffened while her stomach roiled. Imperceptibly, she withdrew and Mirry sighed. The silence stretched, but he made no further move toward her and finally, she was able to raise her eyes to his.

She drowned in the topaz depths. “I’ll never see you again,” she husked. “I know that.”

“Perhaps.” He shrugged and feathers whispered across her pillows. “Perhaps not.”

The moment he’d set her free, perversely, she wanted to be held. She shook her head, amazed at herself. Her brain must be disordered by such unadulterated beauty. He’d hypnotized her.

“No?” He squeezed his eyes shut and inhaled deeply. A muscle at the corner of his jaw knotted. “Ah well, I’ll not force you.” He sat up with a wince, a tawny angel shining in her shabby wagon. “I’d better go.”

“No! You can’t! I mean—” She swallowed, conscious her voice had risen to an undignified squeak. “Your wings. I have to— They’re still filthy and your wound…”

“Don’t worry, little Fledge.” He trailed his knuckles across her cheek. “I’ll be fine.

He was really going. Really. Forever. All sense left her. The seconds tiptoed by, rich with the strange and varied noises of the Ten Nations Fair at night. A man whistled tunelessly in the distance. Harness jingled in a cheerful counterpoint, one of the vranee whickered.

“You could close your eyes,” she whispered.

In the warmth and the lamplight, the silence seemed endless. A night wind swept over the campground, making canvas flap and timber creak. The little wagon rocked the slightest bit.

Finally, Mirry said, “So I could.” Every movement graceful and deliberate, he took the bowl from her nerveless fingers and laid it on the floor. Then he lay back against the pillows, reached out a long arm and drew her down to his chest. He tipped up her chin with one hand, tilted his head and fitted his mouth over hers.

Her first gasp was one of surprise, her second a moan of pleasure. Ah Goddess, he kissed as though time was an irrelevance, nibbling lightly at her lower lip, running his tongue gently over the curve of it. There was no rush, no slobbering or pushing, just an ocean of gentle delight, of satin smooth and tingling texture, wet and hot and firm. As it went on and on and he showed no sign of impatience or dissatisfaction, Fledge allowed herself to relax, to sink into the intoxicating depths of it, a fraction at a time.

Mirry still held her hand in his, his long fingers laced through hers. When the other flailed about, he caught it and skimmed it over the good side of his chest, brushing her palm over the fine feathers. They were soft and cool, tickling her skin, the way she imagined the breast of a bird might do. But underneath was a wealth of smooth, warm solidity.

Shyly, she let her tongue creep out and play with his. Mirry made a humming sound of approval and drew her closer, spearing his fingers into her hair and dislodging the tie she used to keep the curls from swinging in her face. He deepened the kiss, luring her on until she was so lost in sensation, she would have crawled right inside his skin if she’d been able. His elegant fingers cradled the back of her skull, his big body was hard and furnace hot beneath hers and his tail clamped around her waist, a girdle of silk-clad muscle. Simultaneously ravished and comforted, Fledge moaned into his mouth.

He took his time, but finally, infinitely slowly, he let her surface, brushing his lips across hers, kissing her eyelids, the tip of her nose, laying a trail of nibbles along her jaw. Under her clutching fingers, his shoulders were rigid, as hard as marble, belying the tenderness of his lips. At last, he pulled back to stare into her face.

For an instant, surprise swam in his eyes, but before she could work out why that might be so, he smiled and Fledge lost her mind. It was a grin of unabashed boyish delight and it lit his face with an unholy beauty. Reeling under the impact, she gurgled, as stunned as if he’d hit her with his fist.

“Sweet,” he murmured. “So pouty and soft. Like a little cushion.” He rested the flat of his thumb on the center of her lower lip. “Just here.” His voice dropped a register. “Gods, the things I could do with your mouth…”

*sigh*


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  1. Nina Pierce Said,

    Oh, I came over to play … but sure happy you chose this day to announce and post that (most hot) excerpt! Congratulations to you on the final in the Passionate Plume! Even more fun that you’ll be at RWA to hear your name read. Alas, I am niether a finalist nor will I be at RWA. Next year for both … I’ve promised myself. *hugs* Denise and another congratulations.

  2. Dani Said,

    WooHoo! Congratulations on being TAILSPIN being a Passionate Plume Contest finalist. That’s awesome news.

    Thank you for putting up the excerpt! *sigh* Mirry… What a sight! :mrgreen:

  3. cathy m Said,

    Happy Dance, happy dance!!! What wonderful news, big congrats, Denise. I think this calls for cake of some kind…

  4. Amy Andrews Said,

    Oh Denise - yay!!!! :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin: :grin:

    Best part? I’m going to be there to congratulate you when they call out your name :cool:

  5. Jen Said,

    Gotta love Mirry. He’s the one who pulled me into the universe. I have a thing for male scholars. There’s gotta be more of them. They’re so… eatable. In the best possible way. Brains are so sexy, wit moreso.

    CONGRADS!

  6. Susan Said,

    Congratulations and celebrations :smile: :wink: :grin:
    In my mind I was doing a wild jive, but it’s one thirty in the morning and I’m a bit tired so in reality I did a shuffle, shuffle, ta-da, shrug, shrug, fosse hands for you…
    Loved Mirry too. (Well I have them all except the latest anthology and I will be getting that any moment now). So well done and here’s a couple of verses for your efforts:

    Congratulations Denise,
    you have us down on our knees,
    we’re grateful for whatever you write.

    Felicitations Denise
    we hope you win it and seize
    that plume, passionate, purple and bright.

    You well deserve it Denise,
    you make it look like a breeze
    We hope you grab it with all of your might!

    (To be sung like a pub sing along with lots of sentimental fervour, preferably when slightly :mrgreen: tipsy :mrgreen: )

  7. Susan Said,

    (as it’s just occurred to me I may pronouncing your name wrong and doesn’t rhyme with breeze but with peace, I’ll do my best to come up with another verse, just let me know)

  8. LynTaylor Said,

    Congratulations Denise :D Gee a finalist in the Passionate Plume contest AND no doubt, any day the winner of the COVER OF THE YEAR. Woohoo!!! Go girl!

  9. Tracey O Said,

    Wooo Hoooo Denise - well done :mrgreen: :lol: :grin:

    big mega hugs from me on being a finalist.

  10. Jenny Said,

    Looks like they know a good book when they read it!!! Congratulations. And yes apparently I have more than a name in common with Jen, males scholars ARE delicious. :lol:

  11. Meg Said,

    Congrats!!! It’s well deserved! :grin:

  12. Clynax Said,

    Congratulations!!!! The excerpt reminded me of why I fell in love with Mirry in the first place. Yeay You!!

  13. Denise Said,

    Nina, it’s a date! I’ll see you there next year. :mrgreen:

  14. Denise Said,

    Thanks Dani and Cathy. Hmm, cake schmake. I think I’ll go for champagne. Bottoms up! :mrgreen:

  15. Denise Said,

    AA, we’re gonna have SUCH fun! I can hardly wait. I’ve got the red do-me heels all ready to go. As you know, when I’m excited I get very very LOUD!! Paaaarty!!!! :mrgreen: :twisted: :mrgreen:

  16. Denise Said,

    Totally agree on scholarly men, Jen. Indiana Jones, for instance. :wink: *giggle*

  17. Denise Said,

    Susan, slightly tipsy I can do. :mrgreen: I might possibly manage singing-out-loud drunk. :twisted: I can in fact, sing - I’m can hold a tune quite successfully over a range of about five notes.

    A “pome” for me. Gosh. *blushes* Thanks, mate. And my name does rhyme with peace, but don’t worry. It’s not a name I’ve ever much liked, so I’m not especially attached. OTOH, I met a French guy once who did pronounce it to rhyme with breeze - “‘ello, Deneeeeze,” he said. I just, um, melted… Lucky he was holding my hand at the time. ;-)

  18. Denise Said,

    Thanks Lyn and Tracey! You girls rock! And just so everyone knows - our Tracey is a Golden Heart finalist at the RWA Conference. That’s a Huge Hairy Deal if you didn’t know. I am seriously considering dancing on the table when she wins. :mrgreen:

  19. Denise Said,

    Jenny, I have a deliciously ambiguous master thief walking around in my head at the moment. But I promise you, if I ever get time to write him, he’ll be very intelligent. Just hasn’t had the advantages Mirry’s had.

  20. Denise Said,

    Hey thanks, Meg! I posted your book prize last week, BTW. Let me know when it arrives. I don’t trust the post, she muttered darkly. Such a long way…

  21. Denise Said,

    You know, Clynax, I think it’s the moment Fledge falls in love with him too. And for more than his gorgeous looks. Because he actually listens and it’s not all about him.

  22. Amy Andrews Said,

    Hey I just bought some red do-me heels too. We’ll have to make sure we’re wearing them for the big announcement.
    Champagne? Anyone say champagne?
    It’s now been 18 days sans alcohol. I HATE IT :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad: :mad:
    Have some for me and I will drink champers with you in SF.
    xx

  23. Amelia Said,

    Congratulations Denise!

  24. Eleni Said,

    Denise - fantastic news on being a finalist :grin: :grin: :grin: Wooo Hooo! :mrgreen:

  25. Kim S. Said,

    A HUGE Congratss Denise!!! :grin:

  26. Denise Said,

    AA, I’ve told before you’re a crazy woman. I try not to drink during the week, given that wine is all empty calories. :cry: But I do allow myself a few glasses on the weekend - or when I’m interviewing beautiful Aetherii men. :wink: I’m in awe of your self-discipline. :roll:

  27. Denise Said,

    Aw… Amelia, Eleni and Kim, thanks so much. :grin: It’s such a lovely feeling to be able to share with you all.

  28. Rain Said,

    Congrats!

  29. mary de Said,

    That’s wonderful newa Denise :grin:
    And thank you for sharing….Mirry has to be my next great read.
    Just got through Gift of the Godess.
    Absoutely Wonderful girl.(After nearly 3mths to get here- Lost in transit CAN YOU BELIEVE THAT? so they sent me a replacement order of the 3 books)Arrived 2 weeks ago and all are finished.
    Regards Maryde :wink:

  30. Denise Said,

    Thanks, Rain! :grin:

  31. Denise Said,

    Goodness Maryde, three months! I should think you’d get a replacement order! After all that, I’m so glad you enjoyed Gift of the Goddess. And thanks for taking the time to tell me so. At least if you buy Tailspin you’ll get it straight away. Instant gratification - that’s one of the very best things about ebooks! :mrgreen:

  32. Pamela Said,

    This is the most wonderful news Denise!!! :mrgreen: You, Mirry, Fledge & Jan deserve it.

    OK… so to help you win where do I send the bribes? Gushing letters? Mafia men too break knee caps?? Aything else you can think of??

    To celebrate this auspicious occasion I tink I’ll reread Tailspin… again & again & again :wink:

  33. Denise Said,

    :lol: Thanks,Pamela, but I think we’re beyond help now. Funnily enough, I get more of a charge out of being a finalist, than hearing the placings. It’s all subjective in the end, so I’m pretty philosophical about competitions. I’ll be stoked to be there to hear my name called though!

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